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Post  Allosaurus571 Sun May 17, 2009 11:42 am

Here it is!!!!
Chapter 1
Remembrance


John Seigler walked down the street towards his home. He was carrying a suitcase and wearing his brand new Ray Ban Aviator Glasses. It was a beautiful day in Brunswick, Georgia. It was 4:00 on a Sunday afternoon. He was going home to cheer on the Atlanta Falcons as they played the Pittsburgh Steelers.

Finally, he walked up to a house, reached into his pocket, and pulled out a key. He unlocked the door and walked in. His wife was still at work. He walked to his office and put the suitcase on the desk. The he put his sunglasses into their case and put that on the desk. Then he walked outside and started the grill when his phone rang.

“Hello.” John said while he flipped a burger.

“Hello, this is Joe Jackson. I was just calling to see if you got the papers for the boats.” The caller replied.

“Yep. I got them, it’s a done deal. I sent a check in the mail.” John replied.

“Good, good. Well, hope you like the boats. Talk to ya later.” Joe said.

“Bye.” John hung up. He began to put cheese on the burgers. The cheese melted on when he heard the door open. “Hi Lisa.” John said. His wife walked in. “I made burgers for the game.”

“Mmmmm. They look good.” Lisa replied. Lisa put away her things and sat down on the couch. John walked in with two plates. He gave on to Lisa. He sat down and turned on the TV and changed it to channel 7. They were about to kick the ball off. John began to eat.

“Turner gets the ball at the 5. He’s at the 15, the 20, the 25, the 30. He jukes a player out. He is still going at the 40, the 50, he is finally tackled at the 40 yard line after a spectacular run.” The announcer said. John cheered.

Two hours later, it’s the fourth quarter, 10 seconds left, the Falcons had the ball at the Steelers 40 and they were down by 4. “Ryan hikes the ball. He is under pressure. He running. He throws in the air and . . . Turners got it!! He is at the 30, the 25, the 20, 15, 10, 5. TOUCHDOWN!! The Falcons have beaten the Steelers here in Pittsburgh tonight.” The announcer said as fans booed. John jumped up, he was cheering.

“I am getting tired, I am going to head to bed.” Lisa said.

“Okay. I’ll be up in a minute, just let me clean up.” John replied. Lisa walked to the bedroom. As John cleaned up. He saw a picture of him and Ray Sanders. He remembered the island and how Ray had disappeared. He thought to himself. Should he go back to island? I mean, he had a hundred men, he had two boats, he had the equipment and the firepower to do it. He decided he would think it over.

After a few minutes he was finished cleaning up. He walked to the bedroom. He got in bed. And went to sleep.

The next day, he decided. He was going to go to the island. He walked into the kitchen were Lisa was making breakfast. “Hey, I am going to be out of town for a few days.” John said as he walked in.

“Why?” She asked.

“My men and I are going to a suspicious island on our new boats.” He replied.

“Ok. Well, here’s your breakfast, see you soon.” Lisa replied. They hugged, and john got his suitcase, and left.

John got into his Ford Bronco and drove off towards town. After about 5 minutes, he stopped at a small building and parked. He got out of the truck, and walked in. Inside, a man nodded to him and opened a door leading into an office. He walked in, then, he sat down and picked up the phone. “Hey, this is Seigler, I need all of the troops at the docks by tomorrow.” John said into the phone.

“Yes sir.” The man replied.
Chapter 2 coming soon.


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Post  thegrimmshow Sun May 17, 2009 11:44 am

wow. thats great. Very Happy
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 11:44 am

Yeah,good luck!

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Post  Allosaurus571 Sun May 17, 2009 11:45 am

Sparten 117 got the first planning sheet!
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 11:46 am

You mean joshua?

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Post  Allosaurus571 Sun May 17, 2009 11:50 am

ya, TGS gets the second Planning sheet!
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 11:51 am

Whats a planning sheet?

Edit:Im PM you for the planning sheet already.


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Post  Allosaurus571 Sun May 17, 2009 11:52 am

All the facts, the animals, the charecters, the settings, the title, the chapters etc.
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 11:54 am

well i got it.

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Post  Allosaurus571 Sun May 17, 2009 11:55 am

You will get a lot of info about the next book.
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 11:56 am

Sad soory allo,i cant download anything for a while,so i cant see it.Because i cant download anything

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Post  thegrimmshow Sun May 17, 2009 11:57 am

wow. thats great. Very Happy i can't wait for it's official release. BTW allo. have your book been published. Very Happy
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 11:58 am

Allosaurus571 wrote:You will get a lot of info about the next book.

Umm i cant download anything,sorry,i cant see it.

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Post  thegrimmshow Sun May 17, 2009 12:08 pm

it's ok. lets just wait. Very Happy
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 12:14 pm

ok then.

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Post  thegrimmshow Sun May 17, 2009 12:26 pm

good. Very Happy
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Post  Allosaurus571 Sun May 17, 2009 12:27 pm

Do you like the planning sheet?
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 12:28 pm

I dont know how the planning sheet is like.

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Post  thegrimmshow Sun May 17, 2009 1:31 pm

yea. i liked it. i am so excited for the story. Very Happy
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Post  Guest Sun May 17, 2009 3:55 pm

I wish I knew. No

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Post  thegrimmshow Mon May 18, 2009 4:56 am

we'll we will all know. when he releases it. Very Happy
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Post  Allosaurus571 Sat May 30, 2009 8:44 pm

Chapter 1=90% done
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Post  thegrimmshow Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:06 am

Wow. it's great. a real work of art. Very Happy
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Post  Raging Raptor Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:17 pm

couldnt have put it better myself! really cool!
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