Isla Catar (Story By Allosaurus571) Part 2 DONE!!!!!!

The rest of the story won't fin on the other post so, here Ch7!


As Ray walked through the forest, he made sure his M16 was loaded. He flipped the selector switch to Semi and found the fork in the road. He went down the trail J. Low did. As he walked, he found an abandoned nest, a cracked egg and a dead baby deinoychus next to it.
“What happened here?” He said scratching his head. “This thing didn’t hatch, it was cracked open.
Then, he saw footprints, human footprints. He followed them to a dropoff. He saw something at the bottom but he couldn’t make out what it was. He took a rope out of his backpack and tied it to a tree, the, he descended down the dropoff. When he got to the bottom, he saw something that disgusted him, there, being eaten by tiny featherless chicken looking things eating, what was left of, J. Low.
“Hey, get away from there.” He said, shooting three of the the animals, the rest ran away. “This is disgusting, it worse than what happened to Jack.”
Then, he heard growling, from something big.
Cris was asleep and Nick was being, Nick. Ray was looking around and Ellie looked worried.
“I hope Ray is alright.” Ellie said.
“Don’t worry about him, he’ll be okay.” John replied.
“I hope he is, I don’t wanna die.” Nick said clutching his rifle firmly.
“Nick, you’re not going die, not while I’m around, okay?” John said.
“Okay, I’ll stop.” Nick replied.
Ray slowly turned around, about fifty feet from him, was another large dinosaur, standing over a carcass. He took out a book and found a page with the same dinosaur on it.
“Allosaurus.” He said. He began to back away. Then, he reached into his backpack and put a scope on his rifle. He looked at the Allosaurus. It was almost exactly the same as in the book just different colors.
“I gotta get out of here.” He said, he began to slowly and quietly backwards.
As he crouched down, he heard a roar from behind him. He turned around to see another Allosaurus. He got his gun ready but it had yet to see him. It just walked over to the other Allosaurus. Ray then tried to get farther away, but he tripped over a root and fell. The Allosaurs looked up. It walked over and saw Ray.
It roared at him then lunged. Ray shot and hit its leg, but that didn’t stop it, just slowed it down. He got up and ran. Finally, he stopped and turned around, it was gone. He sat down.
“That was a close one, I thought I was dead for sure.” He said. Then, the animal roared, Ray looked up into the Allosaurus’s eyes. He raised his gun, but the Allosaurus was already lunging at him. He screamed.
They all heard Ray screaming and the gunshots.
“What was that!” Cris said waking up.
“It sounded like Ray.” Ellie said.
“Oh god, not Ray.” John said picking up his shotgun and running down the trail.
“Hey, wait up!” Cris said grabbing his Rifle and running after John. Nick and Ellie followed.

John was running as fast as he could down the trail. Cris, Ellie and Nick were struggling to keep up. When he got to the drop off, he found the rope and rappled down. He saw J. Low’s body but payed no attention, then, he saw it. There, in the shrubs, was a pile of M16 shells and some blood. Cris, Ellie and Nick had just caught back up.
“No, no, NO!” John said, now on his knees. “Why Ray?” He punched the tree.
“I’m sorry.” Ellie said with her hand on John’s shoulder.
“Its not, your fault. I should have gone with him.” John said, tears forming in his eyes. “I can’t believe he is dead.”
“Come on John, staying here will only make you sadder.” Cris said.
“Your right.” John said wiping his eyes and getting up. “We have to get out of here. First, we have to get to the plane, I think I brought a radio along. Now, lets go.” He picked up the shells and put them in his pocket.
“Yes sir.” Cris said.
“Ok.” Nick said, no longer acting like the scardest cat person on earth, but still pretty scared.
They began back towards the rope and climbed back up. When they got back to the top, they headed down the trail, not knowing they took the wrong way. They ended up in a clearing. Then, they saw them. Lumbering around, was a herd of brachiosaurs. They also saw Stegosaurs and Dryosaurs. At the back of it all, Triceratops were ramming each other. And in the middle, was a huge lake.
“Oh, my, god.” They all said at the same time. All wide eyed. “Its beautiful.” Ellie said, still wide eyed.
“Hey look!” Cris said pointing. ‘A river! We can follow it back to the beach!.”
“Ya!” John said. “Lets go.” They all ran to the lake. Though Ellie stopped to pet a Dryosaurus. The dinosaurs began to call, it sounded like they were singing.
When they got to the river, it was eerily quiet. They continued to walk. Then, the stomping began.
“What’s that!?” Nick asked, shivering.
“Its probably one of those big long necks.” Cris said.
Suddenly, a roar echoed throughout the island. The trees began to shake. Cris had his rifle and was looking around, so was John with his shotgun. Then, something broke through the trees, it had a huge snout and a huge spine.
“SPINOSAURUS!” John yelled. He began to open fire. So did Cris and Ellie. Nick just fell and covered his head.
“DIE!!!!!!” Cris shouted as he shot. Then, he ran out of ammo, so did Cris and Ellie.
“RUN!” John yelled. They ran towards the trees, the Spinosaurus in hot pursuit. Then, the Spinosaurs stopped, it then walked away.
“Here you go guys.” John said handing out more ammo. “Hey, were is Nick?” They all looked around only to find he was still covering his head on the ground. “Hey! Nick, come on, he’s gone! Nick slowly got up and ran over.
“Ok, now, let’s go.” John said. They all began to follow the river again.





It was now about 10:00 pm. The group had been walking for an hour when they saw light.

“Guys! I see light!” Ellie said running towards it.

“Finally.” Cris replied. They all ran towards it. When they walked out, they were on the beach. They turned to their left and saw the plane. “Hey, there’s the plane!”

“Good, follow me.” John said running over to the plane.

John began to dig through it. Finally, he found it, the CB radio. He flipped it on, nothing happened. He tried again, still nothing.

“No, come on!” John said as he flipped the switch up and down. Finally, he picked it up and threw it. It hit a pile of metal and knocked a piece off. Under it was a box. John walked over and opened it. In it, was a radio, barley a scratch on it. And, it was battery powered. He flipped it on. It worked! “YES!”

“You got it working?” Ellie asked.

“YA!” John replied.

John began switching through the channels, trying to call for help.

A voice came from the radio. “Hello? This is the Bermuda Directory Assistance.”

“Ok, good, I need to make a call.”

“Do you have a credit card?” The man said sounding bored.

“Hey! Anyone got a credit card?”

“I do.” Ellie said. She walked over and handed him the card.

John told him the number. “Would you like a premium package?” The man asked.

“No I don’t want a premium package! We are trapped on an island!” John said rather loudly into the radio.

“Sir, yelling will not make this go any quicker. “ The man said.

“Can you get me the U.S. Coast Guard?”

“Yes sir.” The man replied. After about ten minutes of talking, John stopped. “Ok, the Coast Guard is coming.”

“Good.” Cris said. “I can’t wait to get off this God forsaken island.”

“Me neither.” Nick said. He had stopped shivering, finally.






After about an hour of waiting, the group heard a faint sound. The sound began to get louder and loader. They looked up and saw an Orange and White Helicopter coming towards them. John loaded up a flare gun and fired it.

“OVER HERE!” He yelled.

The helicopter landed but the rotors continued to spin. “Get in!” A man yelled. They all got in. “Are they in?’ The pilot asked. “Yep, all clear for takeoff.” The man went and got into the co-pilot seat and the Helicopter began to fly into the air.

“You okay Nick?” Ellie asked.

“Ya, I think I have gotten over my fear of flying.” He replied.

“Well good, I don’t have hear you scream anymore.” Cris said.

Ellie smiled. “Stop trying to annoy him.” The lightly pushed him.

“Hey, hey, no fighting. Don’t make me turn this chopper around.” The pilot said jokingly.

John chuckled. “We have got one heck of a story here.”

“Ya, but I doubt anyone will believe us.” Cris said.

“Ah who cares, we saw it firsthand. We know we saw dinosaurs.” John said.

“So those were dinosaurs?” Nick asked.

“Yep, I happened to have a dinosaur book with me. They all matched up.”

“Hmm, well that is interesting. I wonder how they did. I wonder how.” Ellie said.

The Helicopter flew into the dim morning air. Te sky looked beautiful. The ride would have plenty of sights as they flew to Florida to be taken home.


Sorry about the font.
BOOK IS DONE!!!

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!

Yes! That's my new favorite! Very detailed! Great Work!!!

Thank you. *bow, bow*

Lol. Smart choice of making a part 2.

I had to, my topic was to big.

Yeah. Are you thinking of publishing this?

When I am done, yes.

Awesome Story Allo! I love how you added Allosaurus

He is my favorite, I had to add him.

Who thinks Ray died?

EDIT: Ch.9 and ten will be released at the same time. Also, I am trying to find a publisher, I need help!

wow! great stoy. whats the status of chapter 9? i can't wait for it.

Half done, busy.

this is great! i can't wait.

OMG OMG This is soooooo awesome !!!

Why are you cursing God ? This story is the best I've ever seen

I ment Oh My Goodness

ITS DONE!! ISLA CATAR IS DONE!!!!!

wow.

I will get it published!

wow. you should do that.

I WILL!

i can't get enough of saying WOW. because it's just very GREAT!! A VERY DETAILED WORK.

Thank you, thank you. *bow, bow.*

*Standing Ovation*

Ummmm, ok,

well . is there another sequel?