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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:17 pm

Hey guys, this might be the last thing, I just love writing, and let my mind flow away. So I am going to start "Isla Decerta"

Characters: Staff; John Hammond, Jane Powers, Dr Wu, Prof Albert. People included; Main character: Ray. Others: Luke, Lauren, Micheal.


Chapter 1: Enetring the island.

Thunder roared as ray looked out the car window. His brother Jeffrey was loaning him a ride to the airport. When they arrived, Jeffrey gave Ray a special gift. He gave him a special high teck camera Ray always wanted, because Ray knew when he comes back from his trip he won't see his brother ever again except on holidays and on family visits. Jeffrey left, and Ray entered the air port. The woman behind the counter was screaming on the phone, she hang up then.

"How can I help you?" She asked.

Ray answered, "Im going on a special trip to the new island Isla Decerta."

"Wow! That must be exciting! Me and my family are going there this summer."

It was almost end of spring. Ray bought his tickets, and went tohall number 4, and enetered his plane.He was the second one on. The first one was a tall thin austrailain woman. She held binoculars, with a strap around her neck, and was smiling. She seemed excited. Ray found seat 26 and sat down.He sat next to the window, then looked up, he saw a next group of people. One sat down. It was a tall black male. He looked eager, and excited as well. Then two people sat together, both female, both white, one was calling someone and the other was getting their stuff orgainized. He didn't bother to pay attention to look at any more people. He looked out the window again. Then a tall thin white male sat next to him. He seemed smart and a nice guy. The guy introduced himself.
"Hi, I'm Micheal". He said.

Ray answered saying "I'm Ray".

They started talking about them selves more.

Micheal asked "What do you do for a living?"
"I am a archiologist. How bout you?"

"I'm a owner of a restraunt." He answered. He added in, "Im also 26."

Ray replied," Im 23"
They both looked around the plane as they flew by.

The announcer said on the intercom "Everyone please put your food trays up, and cut off your cell phones, we are going to have a bumpy ride."

It felt as if the plane is going to shatter in pieces. Ray doozed off and when he woke up they were landing.

"Oh wow we're here"

The plane shook as it landed on the ground. Everyone exited, and walked down the trail. Micheal looked to his left and saw a cage in a far distance. He saw something moving in it. He wondered what dinosaur it was. When the trail came to a stop at the vistor center, Prof albert(Co Administrator) walked out and said " Welcome to out park! We have created dinosaurs so astonishing, you won't ever want to leave!" As he talked more about how the schedule will be and the tour, Ray looked around at the humongus building. There was a painting of a Brachiosaurus and above it said Isla Decerta. Then the co administrator said. " Once you get a chance, you may go tothe next building, or buildings, that are hotels. Thats where you will sleep. Once you get another chance, please go to the safari tour, and take the tour. Thank you. Micheal and Ray seperated, he went to a counter and asked the the man behind the counter for his room key. He asked for details such as adress name number, and he gave it to him. He looked at the card it said. Building 2. Room 13. As he walked outside, he was walking past the first building, he saw the first car leaving. He stopped at his building. He entered, when he entered, he saw two people going into a room. He went to room 13 and opened the door. He met his roomate named lauren.

"Hello. Im lauren." She said.

"Im ray."

They did the same as him and micheal did, they told about themselves, lauren said she is a pilot.And age of 27. Ray told about himself. Then they both unpacked. They both exited together looking for the tour. They found it. They both recieved a card. They both got car#1, and one more person named luke. They all got in. And the tour started...

Chapter 2. Tour.

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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:23 pm

Woohoo! You cut to the chase. It took me 4 chapters to introduce all of my characters.

Oh, and Ray Arnold is arguably one of my favorite characters, and am glad someone other than me finally put him in a story. Very Happy

There are some spelling mistakes, which I'll go through and comb out for ya. Very Happy

EDIT never mind; I have no moderation powers here. Ah well, you're a big boy Razz You can do it yourself.
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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:38 pm

I didn't use Ray Arnold in it. I used Jane powers, John Hammond, Prof Albert(I made him up) And Dr Wu. I used all of the alive characters.

EDIT: You must have thought Ray the main character was Ray Arnold, no Ray is a different person.

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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:46 pm

Oh, sorry. I thought it was, cause that is who is in mine, so he is who I think of when someone says "Ray".
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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:48 pm

Oh Okay. When I come back fro ma party, I will make another chapter.

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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:27 pm

Chapter 2: The safari tour. Micheal was in Car#3. He drove off first. He listened to the announcer.

"Hello ladies and gentlemen, I will be your tour for the day. Now, if you feel unsafe, push the Red button near the door. Oh, and here we are, at our first dinosaur herd. Stegosaurus. These magnificent creatures are from the Jurassic Period. Their tails can be for defending themselves and their babies".

We stopped to look and observe. Then we moved again. We went to a fence. It made a buzzing sound. It was a large carnivore fence. Inside it held the charcaradontosaurus. It was eating a cow. It roared went to the back of the fence. Micheal and the group looked away when they started moving. When the car left, the energy in the creatures fence was used up. Nobody knew yet. The charcaradontosaurus was getting hungry again. There was a cow next to the fence. The dinosaur ran up to it and grabbed it, but ran into the fence knocking it down. It was free. It saw the car in a far distance. It slowly started walking towards it.

Car # 1.

"Where in the world is the charcaradontosaurus?" Luke asked.

" It might be sleeping in the back of the cage." The driver replied. Right after he said that, they heard a loud crash and people screaming.They all looked forward, and saw people scrambling across the field, and running as fast as they can. The dinosaur was still hungry. He was going on a rampage. It looked at the driver running, and charged. The driver his behind a few trees. The dino looked from one side to another, then knocked the middle tree, tripping the driver. The charcaradontosaurus grabbed him by his mouth, and swallowing the driver whole. The others ran, the people in the 1st car were in shock. The dino turned around torwards the first car. It slowly started off walking, into full speed running. The car backed out, and drove towards the garage. When they entered, the garage closed. The charcaradontosaurus banged on the door. Everyone very nervously got out of the car, they looked at the door, and then the roof busted and there was the dinosaur.
Chapter 3: Evacuating.


"We have to get out of here!" Lauren screamed.

They ran to the door, and ran down the hall way. They heard foot steps of it though, and screaming from the outside. The security will be putting it to sleep soon. But luke was the first to open the door, and saw the building being evacuated.

Ray said" It shouldn't be this bad, it's one dinosaur, they can just put it to sleep."
One of the evacuaters screamed to everyone in the building,

"Keep moving! We are evacuating the island, the dinosaurs have broken out, the elecricity has been sucked out! Keep going!"

Everyone murmured to themselves and others. The group ran to the end of the line and waited to get out. They heard a loud sharp scream from a woman, and everyone ran back.

"Rawl! Raa!"

It was a Utah Raptor. It charged to the door, and grabbed the screaming lady and ran back out. Everyone was running up the stairs now.The group was next to a set of stairs and ran up them. Luke Ray and lauren found the lounge. They turned the lights off and hid in a closet.

Back to micheal.

Where is everyone? He thought to himself. There evacuating, but nobody is here. He stood at the center of the room everyone was just in, where the utah raptor was. He heard a scratching at the door, and it burst open.

"Rawl!"
It was the Utah Raptor. "Ahh!" He yelled. He ran up the stairs, and when he go to the top, he ran into a hall way. The Utah Raptor jumped on the stairs half way, then jumped the rest. It pounced on the wooden door, breaking a hole big enough for it to crawl into. It chased Micheal as he slammed a door in its face. It was metal this time. He was in the kitchen. He ran into a another room, instead it was the lounge. He heard luke Ray, and Lauren scream, think he was the utah raptor. He screamed back.

Luke asked. "Oh my gosh, your still alive!"

Micheal replied in a high tone gasping for air. "Yes I am alive." They all sat down in the closet. Luke got up to go into the kitchen. "NO! The utah raptor is almost in there!"

"Almost? he asked.

"Well it was trying to get me but I shut the door in its face, and I think Its trying to open it up." He answered.

Lauren yelled. "SO WERE STUCK HERE?!" They all yelled and argued.

Ray covered up the yelling and arguing by saying" SHUT UP! We are about to die and all you guys can do is argue? Okay, there may be some knives in the kitchen, I don't think its in there yet, we have to get all the weapons we need."

They slowly opened the door and walked in, they opened drawers, opened bottom drawers and found knives.
Luke took a butcher knife. Lauren took a slicing knife. Ray and Micheal took a chopping knife.

They heard the utah raptor on the other side. They were ready to open the door and fight. It was the only way.

They counted down to open it.

5
4
3
2
1
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More in the next chapter...

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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:09 pm

Very Happy Amazing! I love the fast pace, how you are just cutting to the action!

I also hate cliffhangers!!! OPEN THE GATE!

When will the next chapter be?
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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:16 pm

Tomorrow after school.

EDIT RIGHT NOW!!


They opened the door, and started whacking crazy. There was nothing there. They looked everywhere. Luke walked up past two doors, when he got to the 3rd one. The door was wide open and the Utah Raptor grabbed him and dragged him into another room. Micheal threw the knife, and it landed on the neck of the dinosaur. It started bleeding and screeching. It couldn't stay up for ever with a knife like that in its neck, but it still took luke away.They looked through the entrance of the dark room, and saw nothing, but a open door with luke yelling in it. The Utah Raptor Growled. The group ran to the broken door, ran down stairs, and went outside.There were no helicopters, planes or anything. They all left and left them behind, the people have must have gotten out in time. They saw an abanded tour car. They took it to go to the security section about a mile from there. As they started driving, Ray started to think about everyone dying. Luke, that woman screaming for her life, The driver. All these other people out there.

"Guys, I dont know which way to go" Lauren said. She was navigating us.

"BEEEP! COME ON YOU STUPID ANIMALS!" she yelled.

"That is not a good thing to do!" Micheal yelled.

The dinosaur was a triceratops.. It looked up at the car and walked to the side of it. It stuck its horns in one front door and one back door, and started to tip it, as it is about to fall over.

Everyone, "AHH!"

The car made a loud grinding noise and fell on its side. The trike went away. Everyone climbed out of the windows on the front.They got out and micheal wasn't there.They looked down, then up, and looked up to the right, they saw him being carried by a giant prehistoric pterasaur. Ray got in the car again, and found the rifle, and shot the bird, it fell down, and threw micheal. They both ran up to micheal. The claws of the bird went into his chest. He was leaking blood. And he was injured by being thrown by the bird. Micheal wasn't alive. He was dead by the second. Nobody will make it. Lauren and Ray will never make it. They had a rifle, but that won't help. Ray saw some Velociraptors coming.

"Dont worry, they aren't that dangerous, there excellent hunters, but just an oversized compy."

He shot the raptors dead, and they walked on. They heard a helicoptor, but couldn't see it, they searched everywhere for the copter. They wanted to live. Be free, have a life, but this is it. They heard a large foot step, and saw a tyrannosaurus...

"Oh this couldn't get better!" he yelled "oops" The rex looked straight at him and charged while roaring. They both ran and headed back to the lop sided car. The trike was back, and charged at the rex, pushing him down, and kept pushing its horns in deeper and deeper in its belly, Until the rex fell flat down. Ray and Lauren were behind the car so the trike wouldn't see them. Five minutes later lauren said

"I think its gone" right when she said that, the car pushed up over them. They got up and ran. They saw the security center with a helicoptor, they ran faster. They lost the trike, and got to the copter, they got to it the pilots were dead with compys all over thems. Then they all jumped on lauren and Ray. They both struggled and screamed.
They got up, and ran again. This is all they will be able to do for the last times of their lives, just run.They got to the vistors center after 2 hours of walking. They saw a copter there though, with live pilots, they ran up to the copter, and the pilots said" Need a lift?" they thanked him and they got in. They left the island, alive.

3 months later.

InGen workers are in a secret facility. "Hey! Set the stego cage over here!" One worker yelled. A Rex raored through out the facility. All dinosaurs roared, screeched. They were keeping dinosaurs back into were Ray and Lauren live. Lauren and Ray got together, and live together now. But now in the next chapter, they have to survive rampaging dinosaurs through out the whole city of Los Angelus...

Chapter 4: Night runners.


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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:25 pm

DANG!! Ah well, suppose I can wait. :P
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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:10 pm

Check the edit in my other post.

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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:25 pm

I just did, and guess what? MOAR SUSPENSE.. Very Happy


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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:26 pm

One more chapter, than Isla decerta is becoming a whole new story, but with Ray and Lauren in it.

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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:30 pm

Cool, will it just be on a different island?
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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:31 pm

Maybe, it might not even be on the island, it may even be in the city for a few chapters. I'm not sure though.

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Post  Andrew Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:47 pm

It isn't a very long one its just like a short summary this time I dont have enough time right now.


Its been 3 months since Lauren or Ray have been on the island. They are married now, and both are paleontologist, and are more happier than ever. Until this month just happens to come by and everyone screams in terror, and dies in pain. But lets get to the story now.

"Lauren, where are my keys?" Ray asked.

"On the counter!" she yelled in a faint distance from upstairs.

"Thank you ,bye! Love you!"

"Love you too!"

Ray left and Lauren was leaving in two hours to meet him at the flaming cliffs. Ray is on his way to the airport, and Lauren is finishing up the laundry.She then gets dressed. Ray is on the plane by now. He will be there in 2 hours. Lauren gets her equipment ready. She gets her bag and goes out the door, she hears a truck and she looks up. It was a truck that says "InGen" on it.

"No. This isn't going to happen." She said to herself.

She got into her car and followed the trucks. There were bunches of trucks, everywhere. Then they all led to a Base Camp. It had people scattered everywhere.She heard roaring and saw hundreds of dinosaurs. There in the middle of a open space with no contact with the goverment, and there making a base camp without permission. She drove down the hill and parked her car, she got on top of her car and yelled

"HEY! I need to see your boss now!"

A man in a beige pants and shirt came up to her. He said

"May I help you?" in a nasty voice.

"You guys can't make Jurassic Park here. This is the third time. First Isla nublar, then San deigo, Isla Decerta, now here?! No, I will call the goverment."

"We are part of the goverment we don't need their permission."

"You are making a mistake. Everyone is going to die if you do this."

"Ma'am please leave before we call the police please, this is private property."

She got in her car and left. It was up to her to stop those foolish people. She had to cancel the trip has been waiting for forever. And just stop these maniacs. She drove home and tried to make up some plan. She will stopthem some how, before its to late, and they let everyone die....

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Post  Raging Raptor Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:51 pm

cheers Glad to see the main characters are still together.
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Post  Andrew Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:25 am

Well actually this time Ray is across the world while Lauren is in Los Angelus, and hse mught either have to

A)Stop them from making a park.

B) Run for her life.

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Post  Raging Raptor Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:24 pm

...any updates on the story?? I don't want it to die like the rest of your stories. Sad
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Post  Andrew Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:56 pm

I just finished that story though. I may wait a while to continue on it.

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