Jurassic park 4 by raptors rule please read lol!!!

I am to lazy to post this whole thing over again so I posted it at me and RR's site here is the link.Please read and rate.And sorry I couldn't post it here it was just tooo long!!!


LINK: http://jurassicforum.superdiscussion.net/fanatic-scripts-f10/jurassic-park-4-by-raptors-rule-please-read-lol-t43.htm#179

Like I said on our forum use quotes buddy. Makes it a lot smoother to read, besides that, I like the story, actually lives up to what I thought it was.

Yea I kn to late now cuse I aigoing to edit that whole thing over again lol it is to long!

The rank images on that site are huge

How aboat we stay on topic it is not aboat the site ok.

I would read it but, no offence, the grammer is horrible.

Yes, I know i was rushing.

Allosaurus571 wrote:I would read it but, no offence, the grammer is horrible.

agreed. If you speed read as I did, it gets less noticable. Maybe I'm just used to it. :P


Anyway, since I'm admin there, I will do you a favor and go through and make grammar corrections, ol pal.


I won't change ANYTHING, just add quotes and good grammar corrections.

Permission reply?

Thanks dude your the best, I'm just too tired to go throught that whole thing over again it took sooo long, lol yes you can do it.

Thanks. Also, I will copy/paste it into your post here, so people don't have to follow the link.

How it will be too long?

I will allow you to double post or triple post if you need to, to post the story

Thanks allo, I thought I would be : ...

Guest wrote:I am to lazy to post this whole thing over again so I posted it at me and RR's site here is the link.Please read and rate.And sorry I couldn't post it here it was just tooo long!!!


LINK: http://jurassicforum.superdiscussion.net/fanatic-scripts-f10/jurassic-park-4-by-raptors-rule-please-read-lol-t43.htm#179

There's something new called "copying and pasting."

I know already but it's still long.