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when the carchara rushes at the lone raptor

The tiny raptor watches the action at the refuge of a tiny ditch, where the charchar knocks the Lone Raptor down and attempts to bite him, just when..

the raptor get up and pounces on top og the charchars head! The charchar tries to shake him off as the raptor digs his claews into the charchars eyes. Then...

Out of the clearing the Deinys show up! they leaped at the Lone raptor who dangled on the Charchar, but they kept hitting the charchar.

The charchar was getting hit in the crossfire of the carnage! But then a dieny jumped up at the raptor and also landed on the big carns head. The Raptor tail whiped the deiny of the charchar, and it fell down on another dieny. The new dieny, enraged began to duel the one who fell, and ....

The lone raptor jumped off the charchar to kill the Deiny, and dodged two other deinys....

Raging Raptor wrote:The lone raptor jumped off the charchar to kill the Deiny, and dodged two other deinys....

sorry but that last part i didnt understand...

the raptor that was attacking the Charchar jumped off to kill sum deinys, sorry if I messed it up.

Im new to RPG's. Never really liked to many RPG's.


Continue. It's your turn.

but as he jumped, the charchar grabbed his tail!

Swinging the raptor, and finally releasing the raptor after on of the deinys jumped on his tail in aggrivation. The Raptor landed softly in a wet bog, and was completely knocked out. The battle between the Charchar and Deinys raged on..

The newborn Looked at the other side and saw an carcass. He was hungrier now, and decided to chow. He headed toward the carcass.

(he is now 4 Months bigger)

The lone raptor and all the deinychus that where in the battle are now long gone-Either dead or in new ports of terror. The baby raptor started into the carcass, just as....

(Is that not Godmodding)

(well, you skipped ahead 4 months)

(I ment my Character had a faster growth)

(well I thought you skipped ahead 4 months, and how come your character gets special growth, get what I'm saying?)

Raging Raptor wrote:(well I thought you skipped ahead 4 months, and how come your character gets special growth, get what I'm saying?)

(All Raptors had different Growth Rates)

(ah, i see..touche..)

back to topic

im an alioramus

Please use proper grammar in your posts.

I will choose the best and they will be the WINNER

If you copy other people's Ideas ( from here) , you will not be able to win.

Just noticed something:

Methinks this was a contest, not an RPG. Maybe it was a story contest or something, you made a story and the next person picks up where you left off. I don't think the contest is still running, though.

I think its a story, so lets get back to it...


The lone raptor (whom we shall now affectionatly call Loner ) Got up from the bog, and seeing that the charchar was gone, decided to hunt for food. In the distance was a herd of Dryosaurs, and to the left, a lone, yet possibly dangerous, Styracosaur.

then the raptor Run at its full speed towards the drysosaurus seconds later blood spilled all over the place
the raptor was in the mouth of the alioramus it was caught in mid air while trying to attack the dryosaurs
the raptor was eaten alive because only the spinal cord snapped putting it into paralysis but still alive
while being eaten by the alioramus

But Loner wasnt paralyzed! As he sit in the Alioramus stomach (how did an alioramus swallow a velociraptor? Arrnt they rather small?) He began to crawl his way out, until he finally burst free from the Alio's stomach, bursting guts everywhere. The raptor began to feast on the dead animal.

okay let me clear it
i didn't said swallow i said eaten