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Post  Andrew Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:12 pm

Pilot: We are landing in five minutes, please buckle up.

They did so, and they saw grant waiting. The plane landed, and they got into two teams. One team had mike, alexandra, and the pilot. The other team had grant ian and elie. Team 1 (mike alexandra and pilot) went on the west, team 2 (ian elie and and grant ) went on the east.

Group 1.

Pilot: This seems so cool! I want to see a T rex!

Alex: No you dont. Thats one of the biggest predators on the island.

Mike: They are carnivores, they would be pleased to see us ....

Pilot: Fine fine, lets go down this trail.

They walked down, and say a genetic building. It was quite small,but it had room for the generator.

Mike: This is it! This is what Nick was here for!

They switched it off, and the building went dark. They walked out, but this time, the forest was quiet, too quiet.
The birds werent chirping, nothing.

Alex: This isnt good, whenever the forest is quiet, a predator is near.

Mike: here both of you take a gun. Lets head back to the building.

They went to the building, and watched... Nothing...And more nothing, until, they heard a sound.

Grrr.....Grrrr....

It got louder and louder, like to was coming towards them. Then stopped. Total silence. The pilot stuck out his head.

Pilot: Looks like nothing is ou--

That talking, turned into a scream, the pilot tripped over, and something dragged him by his ankles into the forest. They still heard him screaming, then they heard a high pitched growl "Raaa"

Alex:Oh my god, oh my god....

Mike:Shh!

The screaming stopped, all they could hear was a ripping noise, like flesh being ripped.Then a shadow started to pear out of the forest.....

Group 2.

Elie: Did you hear that?

Ian: Yes, it sounded like someone screaming, and a dinosaur.

Sarah walked up and said "No, this isnt any dinosaur, it sounds like a.....velociraptor."

Ian: It does. We have to go check the group.

Elie: Wait, the raptors can kill all of us though, they are pack hunters.

Sarah:True. We cant just let them die though.

"Ahhhhhhh!"

Mike and alex came running.

Ian: Where is the pilot?

Alex: He is dead! We have to go right now!

Alex and mike started running again, elie, sarah, and Ian turned around they saw 5 small creatures running towards them. They started running. Then in front of all of us, an allosaur popped out at them. The raptors ran back. Mike and elie ran in the forest. Ian ran straight backwards. Alex looked up. The allosaur looked down. She had a plan. The allosaur reached down, then she dodged it, and the allosaur tripped himself. Alex ran. The allosaur chased her.Then she ran into a lab. There were broken egg shells, spilt liquids dried up. She climbed up a ladder, leading up stairs. She ran into a room.

Boom boom boom. Over and over, and stopped. CRASH! The allosaur has broken through the ceiling from downstairs, leading to upstairs. Only his head could fit, then he tried to reach alex. She was trapped against the wall. Then she saw a gun over a feet few. She ran to it, and aimed at the allosaurus. She fired, and the head of the allosaur disappeared.She looked down, and she could see, she shot right in the head of the allosaur and killed it.Blood was leaking out of it while it lay on the ground. She climbed down the ladder. Walked out the door, and started looking for everyone. Now she had to find everyone, or everyone had to find her. . . .

Ian:Sarah! Mike! Elie! Alex!

Alex: Yeah!

Ian: I'm coming!

They caught up with each other.
They started walking, and fell down a hill, and landed in a den. It had eggs. It had a baby rex in it. It was a rex nest. . . . The rex started to wail. Boom boom boom. The parents were coming.

Ian: Dont move.

They stood still, and the rexes walked in.they sniffed the area. Alex sneezed...

They looked right at alex. . . .They started walking, and they started sniffing her. The baby rex started wailing.
The parents walked back to it. Alex and Ian slowly walked out of there. They ran out into the forest now. Then they heard a scream. It was sarah....

More stories on The Lost World soon.

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Post  raptors rule Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:17 pm

Wow good job!!! Very Happy
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Post  Andrew Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:18 pm

Thanks I plan to make atleast 2 more.

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Post  Jfrog Thu Nov 26, 2009 1:47 am

very good,.....yiur kinda lucky if it was real, and its gonna be................
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Post  Andrew Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:17 am

I wouldn't want to be the pilot. I'd be Alex, she has the shot gun.

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Post  raptors rule Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:20 am

Andrew wrote:I wouldn't want to be the pilot. I'd be Alex, she has the shot gun.

Lol I wouldn't want to either. Razz Can't wait for the next part.I wonder what happened. bounce
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Post  Andrew Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:24 am

I just love making this stories. I dont know what inspires me to write though, I have lots of journals, and I write and write about anything.

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Post  raptors rule Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:28 am

Lol I have none but sometimes every once in a while I will.I think the rex ate her.
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Post  Andrew Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:31 am

You will see, because I dont know yet either, I just come up with meh mind.

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Post  raptors rule Thu Nov 26, 2009 10:13 am

Then I sugest to get to work. Smile
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Post  Andrew Thu Nov 26, 2009 10:14 am

It'll be a thanksgiving special. Riiiiight....

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