Jurassic park 4 by raptors rule please read lol!!!

Guest on Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:05 pm

I am to lazy to post this whole thing over again so I posted it at me and RR's site here is the link.Please read and rate.And sorry I couldn't post it here it was just tooo long!!! Very Happy

LINK: http://jurassicforum.superdiscussion.net/fanatic-scripts-f10/jurassic-park-4-by-raptors-rule-please-read-lol-t43.htm#179

**Raging Raptor** · **Raging Raptor** on Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:24 pm

Like I said on our forum use quotes buddy. Makes it a lot smoother to read, besides that, I like the story, actually lives up to what I thought it was. bom

Guest on Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:27 pm

Yea I kn to late now cuse I aigoing to edit that whole thing over again lol it is to long! Very Happy

Nova · Nova on Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:26 pm

The rank images on that site are huge

Guest on Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:48 pm

How aboat we stay on topic it is not aboat the site ok. Neutral

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Thu Oct 15, 2009 4:12 pm

I would read it but, no offence, the grammer is horrible.

Guest on Thu Oct 15, 2009 4:26 pm

Yes, I know i was rushing. Embarassed

**Raging Raptor** · **Raging Raptor** on Thu Oct 15, 2009 6:18 pm

Allosaurus571 wrote:I would read it but, no offence, the grammer is horrible.

agreed. If you speed read as I did, it gets less noticable. Maybe I'm just used to it. :P

Anyway, since I'm admin there, I will do you a favor and go through and make grammar corrections, ol pal.

I won't change ANYTHING, just add quotes and good grammar corrections.

Permission reply?

Guest on Thu Oct 15, 2009 6:20 pm

Thanks dude your the best, I'm just too tired to go throught that whole thing over again it took sooo long, lol yes you can do it. Very Happy

**Raging Raptor** · **Raging Raptor** on Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:15 am

Thanks. Also, I will copy/paste it into your post here, so people don't have to follow the link.

Guest on Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:56 am

How it will be too long?

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:59 am

I will allow you to double post or triple post if you need to, to post the story

Guest on Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:02 am

Thanks allo, I thought I would be : MEDIC!

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**Gopher** · **Gopher** on Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:19 pm

Guest wrote:I am to lazy to post this whole thing over again so I posted it at me and RR's site here is the link.Please read and rate.And sorry I couldn't post it here it was just tooo long!!!

LINK: http://jurassicforum.superdiscussion.net/fanatic-scripts-f10/jurassic-park-4-by-raptors-rule-please-read-lol-t43.htm#179

There's something new called "copying and pasting."

raptors rule · raptors rule on Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:03 pm

I know already but it's still long.

Jurassic park 4 by raptors rule please read lol!!!

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