Re: Isla Catar (Story by Allosaurus571) Part 1 DONE!!!!!!

**Gopher** · **Gopher** on Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:14 am

I say raptors.

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:38 am

Also, who thinks Nick will survive?

**Gopher** · **Gopher** on Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:43 am

hmmm....I don't think so.

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:57 pm

Ch. 4 DONE!!!!

**godzillaman** · **godzillaman** on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:50 am

Really, really, good. I just noticed a few errors in the tenses. (e.g. you say something was and then it is.) Also, when the plane crashes, you say "the plane" a lot, I think it would be just as good with "it".

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Sat Nov 29, 2008 2:25 pm

Its my first long story.

**Gopher** · **Gopher** on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:29 pm

Nice, but if it were to be a real long story, the chapters would be much longer.

JPOG Nerd 01 · JPOG Nerd 01 on Fri Dec 12, 2008 1:30 am

Did you make this ???

It's um...... really good !

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:22 pm

Thanks!

**Gopher** · **Gopher** on Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:42 pm

True....

JPOG Nerd 01 · JPOG Nerd 01 on Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:29 pm

Allo , when are you going to finish it ????

Or have you finished it but you haven't posted it yet ?????? confused

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Sat Dec 20, 2008 5:40 pm

Ill start on it again. When i am done with chapters I IMDEIATLY post it. So i am not done.

JPOG Nerd 01 · JPOG Nerd 01 on Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:05 pm

Ok , And Allo how long have you been here ????

I haven't even been here a month and I've nilly got 100 posts
afro

**Allosaurus571** · **Allosaurus571** on Sun Dec 21, 2008 10:04 pm

Dude, I created this website.

JPOG Nerd 01 · JPOG Nerd 01 on Sun Dec 21, 2008 10:14 pm

Oh Sorry for asking that Evil or Very Mad

But This site says you have only been here for 6 months !!!

Isla Catar (Story by Allosaurus571) Part 1 DONE!!!!!!

Hows this story?